Good start, but not quite NG material
This is a lot better than your average first-time stick movie. But theres a few things you need to work on.
1. FPS: 10 is just too low. For sticks I recommend you start with 18. And once you get better and have more patience move on to 20+ (30 is if you want to be REALLY pro)
2. Stick Style. You have the stick anatomy working well. However try moving away from the line tool a bit. Theres nothing WRONG with the line tool, but once you get to higher FPS brush-sticks just look so much more fluid.
Apart from that there isn't really anything to complain about. Good start and keep em coming!